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In reading we were learning about bugs. They were telling us about why we should eat bugs. I read you one like bugs help you grow and are healthy. I am going to try and make you eat bugs.
You did a ok blog post. I liked how you did your presentation about eating bugs because you did a different way that I don’t do that much. This reminds me of movie about eating worms, Gross right. Maybe next time you could add why you did it because people might be curious and would want to know why did you do it.
Kind regards Ian. Canterbury Yaldhurst Model School.
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ReplyDeleteHi Jacob,
ReplyDeleteYou did a ok blog post.
I liked how you did your presentation about eating bugs because you did a different way that I don’t do that much.
This reminds me of movie about eating worms, Gross right.
Maybe next time you could add why you did it because people might be curious and would want to know why did you do it.
Kind regards Ian.
Canterbury
Yaldhurst Model School.