This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For writing we have been trying to persuade someone. I am trying to persuade the teachers, I am trying for school to start later. First I did my plan I did a burger. Then I did my writing and then my editing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Good Job Jacob!!! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDelete-Angie