This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
For writing we are learning how to explain, I am explain a baby turtles life cycle. We had to do the write the structure. First we planed, we wrote and then we edited. Please comment if you now anything about sea turtle.
James from shs. I really like your writing it is very helpful and interesting. You could of edited out of the date. Also you could of added pictures other wise it really helpful.
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James from shs. I really like your writing it is very helpful and interesting. You could of edited out of the date. Also you could of added pictures other wise it really helpful.
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